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文章来源:北京中慧言翻译公司  发布时间:2019-01-15 15:54:15  编辑人员:凤凰涅槃

简介:

  这里还有另外一种想法?? The tranquil atmosphere is where an available room is left for your mind to freely wander, then you can sit down slowly, combing your mind smoothly and examining yourself.能体会到你的思路,棒棒哒,就是我觉得那个an available room会不会太直白一点,关注很久了,翻译思路很棒棒喔,每次都很认真读,就是希望在编辑过程中可以再仔细一点喔??,reflection拼错啦~有的空格也没有空出来~不过看得出来思考和翻译过程都很考究呢!

中译英翻译思路

  宁静的氛围,可以直接说“宁静”,用名词,tranquility,quietness, serenity,也可以用“宁静的”形容词修饰氛围,比如a quiet/tranquil atmosphere/ambience:

  the qualities and character of a particularplace and the way these make you feel气氛,情调,环境

  pleasant/relaxing/friendly etc ambience

  The restaurant’s new owners have created a welcoming ambience.

  这家餐厅的新主人营造出一种舒适的气氛。

  思想有了自由驰骋的空间,可以改译为“思想可以自由驰骋”,或者照原文顺序,“这宁静的氛围为你的思想提供了自由驰骋的空间”。谓语动词可以选:

  run riot:if your imagination, emotions, thoughts etc run riot, you cannot ordo not control them 〔想象、感情、思绪等〕无法控制,不加约束

  Manufacturers have let their imaginationsrun riot to create new computer games.

  生产商极尽想象之能事,开发设计新的电脑游戏。

  或者改译成“想你所想”:to ponder overwhatever interests you

  也可以用动宾结构,“释放你的思想”,Free your mind

  梳理思绪,动词可以是:

  Marshal: to organize your thoughts, ideas etc sothat they are clear, effective, or easy to understand 整理〔思路、想法等〕

  marshal your thoughts/arguments etc

  He paused for a moment as if to marshal histhoughts.

  他停顿了片刻,好像在整理思路。

  Clear: To clear your mind or your headmeans to free it from confused thoughts or from the effects of a drug such asalcohol. 使清醒

  He walked up Fifth Avenue to clear hishead.

  他在第五大街上走,让头脑清醒清醒。

  Sort out: If you sort yourself out, you organize yourself or calm yourself so thatyou can act effectively and reasonably. 使平静

  We're in a state of complete chaos here andI need a little time to sort myself out.

  我们这儿处于一片混乱之中,我需要一些时间让自己平静下来。

  检讨过失,动宾结构,动词可选:review/reflecton/look into/examine faults/mistakes, criticize yourself,注意动宾搭配。或处理成名词:self-criticism。

  过失还可以是:

  Lapse: a failure to do something you shoulddo, especially to behave correctly

  〔尤指举止方面的〕疏忽,过失,过错

  He forgot to offer Darren a drink, butMarie did not appear to notice the lapse.

  他忘了给达伦倒饮料,玛丽好像也没有注意到这个疏忽。

  顺思路……

  在宁静的氛围里,你的思想有了自由驰骋的空间,你可以细心坐下梳理你的思绪,检讨你的过失。

  思路1:氛围给你的思想提供了自由驰骋的空间,因此,你可以坐下(梳理、检讨作状语)

  The tranquil atmosphere leaves your mind full space to drift/wander /offers your mind full freedom to drift/wander so you may sit down, sorting out your thoughts and reviewing your faults.

  ▲翻译小技巧

翻译小技巧

  中文的逻辑关系藏在字里行间,英文翻译的时候可以适当补充一些逻辑词(so, but...)。

  思路2:在宁静的氛围里(地点状语),你的思想(主语)可以自由驰骋,因此,你可以坐下(梳理,检讨做状语)

  In the tranquil atmosphere your mind may drift anywhere and you may sit down, sorting out your thoughts and reviewing your faults.

  思路3:在宁静的氛围里(地点状语),你可以坐下(梳理、检讨、让思想自由驰骋做状语)

  In the tranquil atmosphere, you may sit, sorting out your thoughts, reflecting on your faults, with your mind drifting, unrestrained.

  ▲翻译小技巧

  先确定一个主要动作做句子谓语(坐下sit),即确定句子主干。然后将剩余所有动作状态作状语处理(梳理、检讨、驰骋)。

  思路4:安静的氛围给你的思想自由驰骋的空间,也给你梳理思绪检讨过失的空间

  The tranquil atmosphere leaves full space for your mind to drift and you to sort out thoughts and reflect on faults.

  参考译文:

  A quiet atmosphere provides your mind with full freedom to travel anywhere it likes, and is most favorable for you to sort out your thoughts or examine yourself and make a self-criticism.

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